Which Is Correct La Or L.a. Is My French Correct?

Is my french correct? - which is correct la or l.a.

Is it correct my French? Imperfect and passé composé? Direct and indirect pronouns? Please show me I'm wrong and correct it.
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Hero in this story than I years trios. A family was visiting with me and my friend and I played the whole room with my brother. I found felt-tip pen and UN-green. Draw My friend told me the wall. I'm drawing. Seeing my parents Mo. drawing, I had great difficulty. I cried a lot, but I attribute my love of responsibility, because they told me to do, too. My father gave me a spanking Any way. Today I did NOT draw on the walls.